Revisions to pitch and final decisions

As part of our research into forming our final media product, we had made a Pitch. In the pitch, we had received views and opinions from our target audience about what they had thought of our narrative, as well as what should be changed. 

Some of the feedback we had received from pitching our ideas for our music video was extremely beneficial, as it had been something which would have been useful to include to make our final media product effective as well as entertaining to watch. 

Below are some of the responses we had received, we had picked these out of all as we had believed they were the most useful.

1. Add a twist into the music video, such as a flashback.
2. Add more shots; such as close ups and long shots.
3. When the protagonist finds out he's been cheated on, he should punch the antagonist. 

After taking the comments into account, we had gathered as a group and discussed what type of changes should be made to our narrative regarding our target audience's comments. 

For example, we will be including flashbacks within the music videos in order to show what problems had occurred between the protagonist and his girlfriend. For e.g. he will get flashbacks of the memories him and his girlfriend had shared. We also decided to feature a variety of shots, such as long shots. One shot we particularly wanted to use was a long shot for when the protagonist is seen singing the song. Also, when it comes to the protagonist finding out he's been cheated on, we wanted to include a specific reaction. For example, we have decided to make sure the protagonist punches the antagonist. This will show that no matter how down to earth his character may be with his girlfriend, he still has a side to him which is violent. 

However, there were some ideas which our target audience did not mention in the response to the Pitch; we had formed these ideas by ourselves. We had decided to include metaphors, these metaphors will signify the heartbreak and feelings of the protagonist. For example, a glass breaking to connote the heartbreak which the protagonist feels after finding out he has been cheated on. Another metaphor is of the protagonist and his girlfriend's photo disappearing in the wind right before she cheats on him, in order to signify that she is about to cheat on him.